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My Dog Is Very Sensitive I have a cute dog called Max. Max is three years old and is a very active and funny Pug dog. Yesterday, I took him to the veterinary, because he is with a skin problem. The veterinary explained that Max is very sensitive and this skin problems is very common on others Pugs dogs. Now, I need to buy some medicines and to use a special shampoo (for dry skin). Of course I'll spend a lot of money, but I think it's necessary. If you have a pet, you must to take care it, because pets are part of our family and deserve good cares.

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My Dog Is Very Sensitive

I have a cute dog called Max. Max is three years old and is a very active and funny (1) pug. dog
Yesterday, I took him to the veterinary, because he (2) has is with a skin problem.
The veterinarian explained that Max has a skin allergy is very sensitive and it is very common among other pugs. on others Pugs dogs
Now, I need to buy some (3) medicines and to use a special shampoo to treat its dry skin. Of course, I'll spend a lot of money, but I think it's necessary.
If you have a pet, you must to take care of it, because pets are part of our family and deserve good (4) cares.

Hi Jaqueline,

I used to have a shetland and I love dogs. 

For your writing, do allow me to provide some comments:

(1) The word "pug" describes a dog of a particular breed. Therefore, the word "dog" is unnecessary. Another example: A parrot is a certain breed. We say that there is an intelligent parrot in the aviary, but we would not say that there is an intelligent parrot bird in the aviary. 

(2) We use "has" to express the idea that someone or something (i) is undergoing a condition or experience OR (ii) possesses something else. Examples: He has a mental illness. / He has some spare cash. 

(3) If we are referring to drugs as substances that are taken for the prevention of disease, it is an uncountable noun. If we are specifically referring to different kinds of drugs, it becomes a countable noun. Example: I need some medicine (uncountable) for my dog. / I was given three different medicines for my eczema. 

Reference URL: http://www.answers.com/Q/Is_medicine_countable

(4) "care" is an uncountable noun and cannot be quantified. If used as a verb, "care" is used with plural nouns while "cares" is used with singular nouns. 

I hope this helps. 

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My Dog Is Very Sensitive

I have a cute dog called Max. He is three years old and is a very active and funny Pug.
Yesterday, I took him to the vet, because he has a skin problem.
The vet (veterinarian) explained that Max is very sensitive and this skin problem is very common in others Pugs.
Now, I need to buy some medicines and to use a special shampoo (for dry skin). Of course, I'll spend a lot of money, but I think it's necessary.
If you have a pet, you must take care of it, because pets are part of our family and deserve good cares.

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