(IELTS) Essay - Neighbors and Community Spirit
Assignment: In many cities an increasing number of people do not know their neighbours and there is a lack of a sense of community. What are the causes of this problem? How can it be solved?
A serious concern today is the rising trend of people who do not know their neighbors and the weakened sense of community. This tendency could be explained by the lack of shared activities and a strong preference for indoor pastime. One solution to this problem could be the promotion of social events initiated by government or community committees.
Even though typical inhabitants of a modern apartment live only a few meters from each other, the time they spend together every day is practically zero. The principal reason for this contradictory fact is that their majority of waking hours is consumed by commuting and working in geographically separated workplaces. Even when they come back home in the evening, the remaining time is completely devoured by their private leisure activities, such as watching TV, playing video games, or most recently interaction with virtual friends on social networks.
One possible solution to overcome this seemingly inevitable tendency is pouring more effort into the promotion of social events in the community. Such movement may encourage modern city dwellers to break out of their shells and invest more time building relationship with people living next door, therefore enhances the bonding within communities. A wide range of events could be initiated by the government or community committee, such as a charity event for disabled people, or a community garden where everyone can contribute their time and effort to cultivate lovely flower beds.
In conclusion, although the lack of communication between neighbors and the deficit in community spirit has become a social norm in contemporary urban areas, it is not irreversible. With the right initiative from government and community committees, actionable ideas to nudge people back to the good old tradition are endless.
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(IELTS) Essay - Neighbors and Community Spirit
Assignment: In many cities an increasing number of people do not know their neighbours and there is a lack of a sense of community. What are the causes of this problem? How can it be solved?A serious concern today is the rising trend of people who do not know their neighbors and the weakened sense of community. This tendency could be explained by the lack of shared activities and a strong preference for indoor pastimes. One solution to this problem could be the promotion of social events initiated by government or community committees.
Even though typical inhabitants of a modern apartment building live only a few meters from each other, the time they spend together every day is practically zero. The principal reason for this contradictory fact is that their majority of waking hours is consumed by commuting and working in geographically separated workplaces. Even when they come back home in the evening, the remaining time is completely devoured by their private leisure activities, such as watching TV, playing video games, or most recently interaction with virtual friends on social networks.
One possible solution to overcome this seemingly inevitable tendency is pouring more effort into the promotion of social events in the community. Such movement may encourage modern city dwellers to break out of their shells and invest more time building relationships with people living next door, therefore enhancing the bond within communities. A wide range of events could be initiated by the government or community committee, such as a charity event for disabled people, or a community garden where everyone can contribute their time and effort to cultivate lovely flower beds.
In conclusion, although the lack of communication between neighbors and the deficit in community spirit has become a social norm in contemporary urban areas, it is not irreversible. With the right initiative from government and community committees, actionable ideas to nudge people back to the good old tradition are endless.
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