My first post! )
So, I have a problems with my writing and understanding English tenses! =)
That means that I need more practices!
And by tradition.... my usualy morning description! :)
I'm evening person but my kids are early birds, and that's very painful. I have need enormous efforts to wake up and start cooking oatmeal for kids breakfast. And it's better don't try to wake up my wife, it's can be extremely dangerous to your health =)
After kids finish their breakfast, it time for tidying up because they eat like little piggies.
Around this time my wife has been woken and begin to cooking breakfast for us because making oatmeal it's all I can do. :D
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My first post! )
So, I have a problems with my writing and understanding English tenses! =)That means that I need more practices! (should be singular)
And by tradition.... my usualy morning description! :) ("And by tradition" isn't wrong, but it doesn't sound natural in this context.)
I'm an evening person, but my kids are early birds, and that's very painful. I have need It takes enormous efforts to wake up and start cooking oatmeal for my kids' breakfast. And it's better don't try best not to wake up my wife; it's can that could be extremely dangerous to my health =) (Or maybe you could say, "It's best not to wake up your wife; that could be extremely bad for your health!")
After my kids finish their breakfast, it's time for tidying up because they eat like little piggies.
Around this time my wife has been woken will wake up and begin to cooking breakfast for us because making oatmeal it's all I can do is the only thing I can cook. :D
Humor can be hard to portray in a second language, but I think you did a great job! Good entry :)
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