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I just saw your advertisement about a new hiking club at the library. I love hiking and I was the leader of a hiking club in my college. After I graduated, it is hard to find a group of the people like hiking and go hiking together.
May I join your group? I have some questions about joining the group. First, how much for the membership? Can I pay monthly? Second, how often the group will meet? and when? My job usually need to work on weekends, but I can shift my day-off previously with other colleagues.
Besides, I want to recommend my favorite place. Have you ever been to Ali Mountain? The path is not very difficult but a little challenge. When you reach the top of the mountain, you can see a lake in the middle. It is so beautiful. The lake is like a mirror and reflects the sky. I hope our group could have a chance to go there.
Can’t wait to join your group and go hiking together.
Tim
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Writing a letter
HelloI have just seen your advertisement about a new hiking club at the library. I love hiking. I was the leader of a hiking club in my college. After I graduated, it was hard to find a group of people who would like to go hiking together.
May I join your group? I have some questions about joining the group. First, how much is the membership? Can I pay monthly? Second, how often does the group meet and when? I usually need to work weekends, but I can change my day off with other colleagues if needed.
I want to recommend my favorite place. Have you ever been to Ali Mountain? The path is not very difficult but is a bit of a challenge. When you reach the top of the mountain, you can see a lake in the middle. It is so beautiful. The lake is like a mirror that reflects the sky. I hope our group could have a chance to go there.
Can’t wait to join your group and go hiking together.
Tim
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