Milan's Cathedral
The Milan's Cathedral, more known as Duomo, is a huge gotic cathedral located in the heart of the city. It's the most important touristic attraction of Milan.
With 157 meters of length, 11,700 square meters and room for more than 40,000 people, Milan's Duomo is one of the biggest catholic cathedral in the world.
The place was occupied by the Basilica of Saint'Ambrogio until the century V, and, in 836, the Basilica of Santa Tecla was built in the same place. In 1075, both buildings were destroyed by a big fire and, in 1386, the Duomo started being constructed.
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Milan's Cathedral
The Milan's Cathedral, morebetter known as Duomo, is a huge gothic cathedral located in the heart of the city. It's the most important touristic attraction of Milan.With 157 meters of length, 11,700 square meters (of surface) and room for more than 40,000 people, Milan's Duomo is one of the biggest catholic cathedrals in the world.
The place (add: where Milan Cathedral stands now) was occupied by the Basilica of Sant'Ambrogio until the 5th century V, and in 836 the Basilica of Santa Tecla was built in the same place. In 1075, both buildings (why do you say both buildings? You wrote that Sant'Ambrogio was there only until the 5th century ;)) were destroyed by a big fire, and in 1386 the Duomo's construction started being constructed.
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Milan's Cathedral
The Milan's Cathedral, better known as the Duomo, is a huge gothic cathedral located in the heart of the city. It's the most important touristic attraction of Milan.At 157 meters long, 11,700 square meters (what is this dimension? the volume? floor area?) and room for more than 40,000 people, Milan's Duomo is one of the biggest Catholic cathedrals in the world.
The location was originally occupied by the Basilica of Saint'Ambrogio until the fifth century V, and, in 836, the Basilica of Santa Tecla was built adjacent to it. In 1075, both buildings were destroyed by a big fire and, in 1386, construction began on the Duomo. started being constructed.
Your english is very good. While the majority of your essay is easy to understand, I made some changes that would make it sound more as a native speaker (in the United States) would write it. I also corrected a few small mistakes. The only thing that isn't clear is the 11,700 square meters. YOu would want to clarify that dimension. Hope this helps.
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Milan's Cathedral
The Milan's Cathedral, more better (good/well - better - the best) known as Duomo. It is a huge gothic cathedral located in the heart of the city. It's the most important touristic attraction of Milan.With 157 meters of length, 11,700 square meters and room for more than 40,000 people, Milan's Duomo is one of the biggest catholic cathedrals in the world.
The place was occupied by the Basilica of Saint'Ambrogio until the century V, and, in 836, the Basilica of Santa Tecla was built in the same place. In 1075, both buildings were destroyed by a big fire and, in 1386, the Duomo construction started being constructed. on the Duomo.
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