small essay. please correct me
According to the passage DDT brings more danger than benefits. The lecturer slightly agrees with this statement that sometimes DDT is a hazard poison, but underpins the idea that DDT is more useful, giving a few examples.
First of all, the author assures that DDT is harmful to wildlife. Whereas, killing insects can lead to losing flora and fauna. The speaker does not support this argument and states that DDT kills the insects which supposedly can spread the diseases to the plants and animals.
Secondly, the author points out that DDT causes to the human`s diseases and leads to increasing of the death rate. The lecturer gives counterargument to this statement, mentioning the real numbers of conversely decreasing death rate on Sri-Lanka when start using DDT. Moreover, the speaker notices that a small quantity of DDT does not influence much on the human`s health. Also, nevertheless DDT is spread or not, it cannot prevent such disease as malaria.
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According to the passage, 'DDT brings more danger than benefits'. The lecturer slightly agrees with this statement that sometimes DDT is a hazard poison, but stresses the idea that DDT is more useful, giving a few examples.
First of all, the author assures that DDT is harmful to wildlife. Whereas, killing insects can lead to losing flora and fauna. The speaker does not support this argument and states that DDT kills the insects which supposedly can spread the diseases to the plants and animals.
Secondly, the author points out that DDT causes to the human`s diseases and leads to increasing of the death rate. The lecturer gives a counter largument to this statement, mentioning the real numbers of conversely decreasing death rate in Sri-Lanka when starting to use DDT. Moreover, the speaker notes that a small quantity of DDT does not strongly influence human health. Nevertheless whether DDT is spread or not, it cannot prevent such disease as malaria.
First of all, the author assures that DDT is harmful to wildlife. Whereas, killing insects can lead to losing flora and fauna. The speaker does not support this argument and states that DDT kills the insects which supposedly can spread the diseases to the plants and animals.
Secondly, the author points out that DDT causes to the human`s diseases and leads to increasing of the death rate. The lecturer gives a counter largument to this statement, mentioning the real numbers of conversely decreasing death rate in Sri-Lanka when starting to use DDT. Moreover, the speaker notes that a small quantity of DDT does not strongly influence human health. Nevertheless whether DDT is spread or not, it cannot prevent such disease as malaria.
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small essay. please correct me
According to the passage, DDT brings more danger than benefits. The lecturer partly agrees with this statement that sometimes DDT is a hazardous poison, but highlights the idea that DDT is more useful, putting forward a few examples.First of all, the author assures that DDT is harmful to wildlife. Whereas, killing insects can lead to losing flora and fauna. The speaker does not support this argument and states that DDT kills __ insects which supposedly can spread __ diseases to _ plants and animals.
Secondly, the author points out that DDT causes ___human`s diseases and leads to an increase in the death rate. The lecturer gives counterargument to this statement, mentioning the real numbers of conversely decreasing death rate on Sri-Lanka with the start of DDT usage. Moreover, the speaker notices that a small quantity of DDT does not influence significantly the human`s health. Also, nevertheless, DDT is spread or not, it cannot prevent such diseases as malaria.
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something chemical)
the full name is Dichlorodiphenyltrichloroethane
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what is DDT by the way?
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