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Some parents are blamed for letting their children become selfish because they fulfill the expectation of their children. The parents believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
People can see that some children are crying in a toy store for the toy which they really want. Some parents will buy for them. Children may consider that they can cry or be noisy to receive the stuff which they want. This may result in a selfish person or a greedy person. Some children are overweight and not healthy because they choose the food which they like and refuse to eat those they are not interested in. Their parents allow them to make their own choices and it leads to native effect on them.
However, making own decisions may help children to understand the importance of it, they may think more before they decide their choices. If children are not satisfied the consequence, they will know they should think twice before making decisions and they will understand that they should take the responsibility, because they are the people who made the decisions. Making own decisions may have a positive effect on children.
Parents should not over protect their children. They should let their children make their own choices, but not every time. Children should learn to think twice and understand they should take the responsibility of the result. I believe that this process is important to children.
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Some parents are blamed for letting their children become selfish because they let them have their own way. These parents believe that it is important for children to decide, themselves, on matters that affect them.One sometimes sees a child throw a tantrum in a toy store for a toy they really want. Some parents will buy it for them. The cChildren might come to see that they can cry or be noisy to receive what they want. This may result in a selfish or greedy person. Some children are overweight and unhealthy because they choose the food which they like and refuse to eat what does not interest them. Their parents allow them to make their own choices and it leads to a (native?) effect on them.
However, making their own decisions may help children to understand the importance of deciding, and they may think more before deciding. If children are not satisfied with the consequences, they will know they should think twice before making decisions and they will understand that they were responsible, because they decided. Making their own decisions may help them.
Parents should not overprotect their children. They should let their children make their own choices, but not every time. Children should learn to reflect and understand they should take responsibility for the result. I believe that this is important for them.
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very well written!
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Some parents are blamed for letting their children become selfish because they fulfill the expectation of their children. The parents believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.People often see children crying in a toy store for the toy they want. Some parents will buy them the toy. As a result, these children may learn that crying or being noisy will give them whatever they want. This may lead to selfish or greedy behaviour. Some children are overweight and unhealthy because they choose the food that they like and refuse to eat those they are not interested in. Their parents allow them to make their own choices and it leads to a negative effect.
However, making own decisions may help children to understand the importance of it, they may think more before they make their choices. If children are not satisfied with the consequence, they will know that they should think twice before making decisions and they will understand that they should take responsibility because they are the people who made the decisions. Letting children make their own decisions may have a positive effect on them.
Parents should not overprotect their children. They should let their children make their own choices, but not all the time. Children should learn to think twice and understand that they should take responsibility for the result. I believe that this process is important for a child to develop.
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I believe culture has a lot to say about how selfish children become. Society affects the parents, and therefore also the children. School teachers and role models, like for instance celebrities, also have a lot of influence on the development of children.
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