In the airport
A man is trying to board an intercontinental flight. He is going to check three pieces of luggage, but the airport policy allows to check only two 20kg bags and one piece of carry on luggage. As far as his third bag is too big to put it in an overhead compartment or under the seat, he had to be charged extra for his third suitcase. He became rather angry because of that, and said to the airport worker, that he don't understand, why the tickets coast next to nothing, but then they charge every small thing and it costs an arm and a leg. He is very angry, because the charge for an overweight luggage is even more than his round trip ticket.
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In the airport
A man is trying to board an intercontinental flight. He is going to check three pieces of luggage, but the airport policy allows to check only two 20kg bags and one piece of carry on luggage. As far as His third bag is too big to put it in an overhead compartment or under the seat, therefore he had to be charged extra for his third suitcase. He became rather angry because of that.and He said to the airport worker that he don't doesn't understand why the tickets coast cost next to nothing, but then they charge every small thing and it costs an arm and a leg an arm and a leg for every little thing. He is very angry, because the charge for an overweight luggage is even more than his round trip ticket.---------------------
Minor corrections, overall it was mostly well written! Good job. You can keep "every small thing" but "every little thing" sounds more natural.
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In At the airport
A man is trying to board an intercontinental flight. He is going to check in three pieces of luggage, but the airport policy allows him to check in only two 20kg bags and one piece of carry on luggage. As far as his third bag is concerned, it is too big to put it in inside an overhead compartment or under the seat, he had to be charged extra for his third suitcase. He became rather angry because of that, and said to the airport worker, that he does not don't understand, why the tickets cost next to nothing, but then they charge every small thing and it costs an arm and a leg. He is very angry, because the charge for an overweight luggage is even more than his round trip ticket.Once again, nicely written! Consistent progress, I must meet your English Teacher =)
PS. 雪碧
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In the airport
A man is trying to board an intercontinental flight. He is going to check in three pieces of luggage, but the airport policy allows to check in only two 20kg bags and one piece of carry on luggage. As far as his third if his bag is too big to put it in an overhead compartment or under the seat, he had to will be charged extra for his third suitcase. He became rather got angry because of that, and said to the airport worker, that he don't does't understand, why the tickets coast so much next to nothing. But then they charge every small thing and it costs an arm and a leg. He is very angry, because the charge for an overweight luggage is even more than his round trip ticket.-
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Jørgen, that's not my idea. This is only a retelling of the story from the English Pod. I'm lack of ideas what to write, but I need to practice, so I decided just to retell the dialog from the English Pod. I hope it will help me to activate my passive vocabulary.
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When he booked the plane he should have read the information about luggage. It seems a bit pricey, though, to charge him more than what his plane ticket costed.
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