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an English song(thank you for checking the essay) Recently, I am studying an English song named TAKE ME TO YOUR HEART. I was attracted immediately by it as soon as I first heart it, I soon decided to learn the song. The song was sung by a group which is called Michael Learns To Rock by three Danes. The song sounds beautiful and it is easy to be sung for learner. You must feel it is very friendly and comfortable when you is listening or singing. This feeling could be more deeply for Chinese because there is a Chinese song which is edited by the same melody. You might have thought of this song, it is GOODBYE KISS singed by Zhang xueyou, a popular and famous Chinese singer. If you are learning Chinese, I highly recommend you to learning this song. I like this song very much and I believe I can learn it very quickly, so let’s PK if you are also interested in it.

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An English Song     [In the main title always capitalize the first, last, and all important words.]

Recently, I have been studying an English song named Take Me to Your Heart. I was immediately attracted to it as soon as I first heard it, and I soon decided to learn the song.
The song was sung by a group which is called Michael Learns To Rock by three Danes.
The song sounds beautiful and it is easy to be sung for a learner. You will feel it is very friendly and comfortable when you are listening or singing. This feeling could be more deep for Chinese because there is a Chinese song which follows/goes by the same melody. You might have thought of this song, it is Goodbye Kiss sung by Zhang Xueyou, a popular and famous Chinese singer. If you are learning Chinese, I highly recommend [that] you learn this song.
I like this song very much and I believe I can learn it very quickly, so let’s PK[??] if you are also interested in it.
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please check and correct it for me, thanks.

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