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Lan Huang
Does it look natural? Besides, is there some gramartical errors/ incorrectnesses in these sentences? I've acquired some words recently from a forum; they're be considered as the most beautiful word in English by native English speakers, and I tried using them to write a little something short and looks cool below.

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Life's just like 'A Queen of the Night'; each ephemeral epoch in life will be part of the world in eternal way, especially the ineffable epiphanies and the period of being limerent over/ with the one.

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It always makes me feel there is some kind of melancholiness during autumn as if it inhered in autumn whereas it is not be able to deviate me from seeking something ethereal in the world in solitude; apart from this, I honestly believe that ones each will find someone who’s iridescent sooner or later. Next, nothing will ever compare the minute we meet the one.

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Everything may not be swimmingly consummate all the time, but even so, it shall gradually grow better and better; apart from this, there are quit a few ethereal and iridescent things in the world for experiencing.

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Does it look natural? Besides, are there some gramartical errors/ incorrectnesses in these sentences?

I've acquired some words recently from a forum; they're considered as the most beautiful words in English by native English speakers, and I tried using them to write a little something short and that looks cool below.

1.

Life's just like 'A Queen of the Night'; each ephemeral epoch in life will be part of the world in an eternal way, especially the ineffable epiphanies and the period of being limerent over/ with the one. ["the period ..." ??  Does not make sense.]

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It always makes me feel there is some kind of melancholiness during autumn as if it inhered in autumn but it is not able to deviate me from seeking something ethereal in the world in solitude. Apart from this, I honestly believe that each one will find someone who’s iridescent[?? People aren't iridescent — need a noun here, like: "who has an iridescent spirit"] sooner or later. Then, nothing will ever compare to the minute we meet them.

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Everything may not be swimmingly consummate all the time, but even so, things shall gradually grow better and better. Apart from this, there are quit a few ethereal and iridescent things in the world for experiencing.

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