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I have a secret.
This past week I had a tough time to make making a decision. It made me think a lot about life. I was 16 when I decided to move to another city. I am sure It was the toughest decision I have ever made in my life. My family members criticized me. They said I was going crazy. I was quitting everything to start from scratch. Looking back, I did not know how impactful that decision would be.I kept it as a secret for about one year. A couple days before leaving the city I told my friends. They got mad, but then happy because they knew I wanted it so bad. The firsts days were good and I did not have a single problem. I started studying at a new school, then I went to college and three days after that I started working.
On the weekends I used to study English. One year ago I graduated from College. I started taking an my MBA and last month I was promoted.
Do not let anyone stop you from making your dreams came come true. I am not saying it will be easy, but I promise you it will be worth it.
Focus on your goals. Be brave. Overcome all your fears. Challenge yourself.
" I can do all things through him who strengthens me "
I hope this let you inspired inspired you.
**Only minor errors! Keep up the good work :)
**Also as a suggestion, break up your paragraphs to make them easier to read & correct. Nice job!
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