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My favorite music I've always loved rock music. Since I was child, I remember that I enjoyed listening bands like Queen o The Beatles on my father's radio. But, there is a band which I become crazy while I'm listening, it is The Doors. Jim Morrison's voice makes me feel relaxed and a bit crazy. As my father and me are Spanish speakers, we didn't understand what that songs were saying, we just enjoyed feel the music. Then, when I began High School, my classmates made fun of me for my musical tastes. They told me that my music was boring and antiquated. For a while, I felt that something was wrong with me. Now, I know everyone has different tastes and nobody has the right to make fun of you, because finaly all that things define who are you.

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My favorite music

I've always loved rock music. Since I was child, I remember that when I was a child ( or Since I was a child, I have always enjoyed listening to bands like...), I enjoyed listening to bands like Queen o The Beatles on my father's radio. But, there is a band which I become makes me crazy while I'm listening,... it is The Doors. Jim Morrison's voice makes me feel relaxed and a bit crazy. As my father and me are Spanish speakers, we didn't understand what that songs were saying, the words in the song, we just enjoyed feeling the music.
Then, when I began High School, my classmates made fun of me for my musical tastes. They told me that my music was boring and antiquated. For a while, I felt that something was wrong with me.
Now, I know everyone has different tastes and nobody has the right to make fun of you, because finaly all of those that things define who are you.


Well written :)  Keep practicing.

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I've always loved rock music. Since I was a child, I remember that I enjoyed listening to bands like Queen o The Beatles on my father's radio. But, there is a band in which I become crazy while I'm listening which I become crazy about I need only to hear it: The Doors. Jim Morrison's voice makes me feel relaxed and a bit crazy. As my father and me I  are Spanish speakers, we didn't understand what that songs were saying about, we just enjoyed feeling the music.

Then, when I began High School, my classmates made fun of me for my musical tastes. They told me that my music was boring and antiquated. For a while, I felt that something was wrong with me. 

Now I know that everyone has different tastes and nobody has the right to make fun of you, because finaly finally all that things define who are you.


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