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A continent made of plastic The consumerism draws an uncertain future. Our natural resources are finite and, in addition, there is a phenomenon of global warming and environmental pollution that make harder our survival on this world. According to the studies in 2050, there will be more plastic wastes in the ocean than fish. This represents a huge problem which we need to solve in the next few years. The problem of trowing plastics in the ocean has produced a giant island on the Pacific Ocean, made basically of garbage. This island represents an important problem for the wildlife and oceanic animals, including birds which eat the plastic material, and death by that cause. On the other hand, consumerism lifestyle has made possible an increase in the world economy which has enabled that middle-class has grown in the last century. This fact provides the population with better living conditions and welfare status, which are very positive aspects. In conclusion, we need to solve wasteful spending problems and make the consumption more suitable to the finite sources of our planet if we really want to conserve the environment and our welfare status.

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A continent made of plastic

The consumerism draws an uncertain future. (this doesn't make sense, perhaps a better phrase would be: 'Our increasing consumerism is creating an uncertain future') Our natural resources are finite; and, in addition, there is a phenomenon of Global warming and environmental pollution make harder our survival harder on this world.

According to the studies (by ____), in 2050 there will be more plastic wastes in the ocean than fish. This is represents a huge problem which we will need to solve in the next few years.
The problem of throwing plastics in the ocean has produced a giant island on the Pacific Ocean, made mostly basically of garbage. This island represents an important problem for marine wildlife the wildlife and oceanic animals, including birds which eat the plastic material, and die due to it. death by that cause.

On the other hand, consumerism consumerist lifestyles has have contributed to made possible an increase in the world economy which has enabled that middle-class to grow has grown in the last century. This fact provides the population with better living conditions and improved wellbeing welfare status, which are very positive aspects of life.

In conclusion, we need to solve wasteful spending problems (this doesn't make much sense, perhaps try 'our waste problem') and make the consumption more suitable to the reduce our consumption to preserve our finite sources of our planet if we really want to conserve the environment and improve our welfare status. wellbeing.

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