#4 Is the Kids Day
In Chile, the first sunday of august is celebrated the Kids Day or The children day. Well, I have two daughters and they ask for gifts. The little ask toys, slimes, balls, cakes, candys and anything, all she recive she like it. Is lovely. The biggest is a teenager and she is in the «clothe s period». For she all is fashion, from the socks to the hats. I say to myself patiencie, after they will grow and i will they say as was your childhood. They are my love.
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#4 It's Kids' Day
In Chile, the first Sunday of August is celebrated as Kids' Day or Children's Day. Well, I have two daughters and they ask for gifts. The little one asks for toys, slime, balls, cakes, candies and anything, and all she receives she likes. It is lovely.The older one is a teenager and she is in the "clothes period." For her, fashion is everything, from the socks to the hats. I say to myself "patience, soon they will grow" and "they are just like you were in your childhood." They are my love.
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