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Try to make sentences in English Part five (Dragon Boat Festival)
Hey guys if you find anything I can improve in my English, please help me about it. thx!!Taiwan is a small island below Japan and besides next to China. Taiwan was ruled by a lot of countries, and one of them is was China. Due to that, some of Taiwanese traditional festivals derive from China.
The Dragon Boat Festival(端午節) is also from China. I don’t know does everyone have the same Dragon Boat Festival customs?
But My grandmother will prepare a lots of Zongzi (粽子) for us. First, my grandmother cooks the bamboo leaves to keep them clean. Second, she shapes the leaves and puts to put different stuffing in it including: the, like sticky like rice, a complete salted egg yolk, mushrooms, stewed pork, and small shrimps. The ingredients I mentioned above are just the basic ones, but you can change it if you want.
And then, she wraps them with bamboo leaves, and steams them. So, you can feel the bamboo smell when you have Zongzi.
By the way, my grandmother recommends to have her Zongzi with sweet chili sauce.
Evan if Taiwan is a small island, we still have tons of ways about how to make nice Zongzi.
We will often have two ways: Northern Zongzi(北部粽) and Eastern Zongzi(南部粽).
We still have a lots of ways to celebrate Dragon Boat Festival, and I just mentioned one of them.
If you have the chance to come to Taiwan during in Dragon Boat Festival, and you are willing to try new stuffs, and I will highly recommend you to try some!
Notes:
Not bad for a basic essay! There are a few things that need improvement on your writing style but that only comes with time and practice.
V/r,
Hi Vicky, I think you write very well, but here are some suggestions. Btw, I think Taiwan is a very large island :) I needed several weeks to bike around it, and the population is larger than the Scandinavian countries combined.
Taiwan is a small island below south of Japan and besides east of China. Taiwan was has been ruled by a lot of countries, and one of them is/was China. Due to that, some of Taiwan's traditional festivals derive from China.
First, my grandmother cooks the bamboo leaves to keep make them clean. Second, she shapes the leaves to put different stuffing in the, like sticky rice, a complete salted egg yolk, mushrooms, stewed pork, and small shrimps. The ingredients I mentioned above are just the basic ones, but and you can change it if you want.
And then, she wraps them with bamboo leaves, and steams them. So you can feel smell the.bamboo smell when you have Zongzi.
By the way, my grandmother recommends to have her Zongzi with sweet chili sauce.
Even if Taiwan is a small island, we still have tons of ways about how to make nice Zongzi.
We will often use one of have two ways: Northern Zongzi(北部粽) and Eastern Zongzi(南部粽).
We still have a lots of ways to celebrate Dragon Boat Festival, and I just mentioned one of them.
If you have the chance to come to Taiwan in during Dragon Boat Festival, and you are willing to try new stuffs, and I will highly recommend you to try some!
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