Breakfast
It's always bothering me what should I eat as a breakfast for great start of the day. I couldn't appreciate enough that my mom has always been making breakfast for my family every single day. Now I live alone, I have to prepare a meal for myself and it is not easy thing.So I would like to say"mom, thanks for your love and support and dedication to us."
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Breakfast
It's always (1) a headache to decide on what I should eat for breakfast to start the day well. I can't appreciate my mom enough that my mom as she has always been making breakfast for my family every day. Now I live alone, (2) so I have to prepare my meals by myself and it is not easy. So, I would like to (3) say,"Mom, thanks for your love, support and dedication to us."Hi Makoto,
Just a few comments on how I edited some parts of your writing:
(1) Someone or something "bothers" us when they do something that worries, disturbs or upsets us. In your sentence, no one is doing anything to "bother you".
(2) I used the connector "so" to express the reason for a situation. Situation: have to prepare my meals // Reason: I live alone (without the help of my mom)
(3) We use a comma (,) to separate a dialogue from the rest of a sentence.
I hope this helps.
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Breakfast
It's always bothering me what should I eat as a breakfast for a great start to my day. I can't appreciate it enough that my mom has always been making breakfast for my family every single day. Now I live alone, I have to prepare meals for myself and it is not an easy thing. So I would like to say "mom, thanks for your love, support, and dedication to us.How I would word it:
I'm always wondering what breakfast would make a great start to my day. I can't appreciate enough how my mum used to make breakfast for my whole family every single day! Now I live alone and have to prepare meals for myself, and it's not easy. Therefore I'd like to say this "Mum, thanks for your love, support, and dedication to us."
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Breakfast
It always bothers me, what should I eat for breakfast for a great start to the day? I couldn't appreciate more that my mom has always made breakfast for my family every single day. Now that I live alone, I have to prepare a meal for myself and it is not an easy thing. So I would like to say, "Mom, thanks for your love, support, and dedication to us."Want to progress faster?
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