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It is not important what you want to be. You took an action which was to go on a journey and then received a piece of the puzzle in life. Life is this cycle, which is this action and this receipt. Whenever you take an action, you will receive the pieces that make your dreams come true. Although you may get pieces which are not ideal and think it's very difficult, they are not mistakes. They are very important experiences. It is not important what you want to be but what kind of people do you want to be which is much more important. Updated by Ayashi's advice

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It is not important what you want to be.

You took an action which was to go on a journey and then you received a piece of the puzzle in life.
Life is this cycle, which is this action and this receipt (Receive isn't a noun. The noun form of receive is receipt.).
Whenever you take an action, you will receive the pieces that make your dreams come true.
Although you may get pieces which are not ideal, and think it's very difficult, they are not mistakes. (You used they and mistakes, so I changed piece into its plural form.)
They are very important experiences.

It is not important what you want to be but what kind of people do you want to be which is much more important.
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Thanks a lot.
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Yeah . I like your words and the last line is the best

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