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Sharing of information Today thanks to the means of internet and mass media everyone has an access to the information. Scientific articles, business strategies, academic materials – you can find everything just pressing the button search in google. Information opens you endless possibilities for studying, work, and travelling. However, information is also a powerful instrument that can play a bad joke if it reaches wrong person. I believe some information is really worth sharing. Everyone deserves to know how scientists are going to fight ageing, how fast food affects our brain, or how current ecological situation influences our lives. Every student should be able to get as much information as possible on a topic he/she is interested in. The more knowledge this person gets, the better professional he/she will become. Sharing information is important for scientific researchers as well: instead of inventing bicycle for 100th time, it’s better to tell the world about this invention and therefore work on possible improvements for this vehicle. Finally, it’s also useful for business: it’s easier to avoid mistakes when you’ve heard someone’s stories of creating start-up or opening new restaurant. On the other hand, some information is really valuable and cannot be shared to everyone. Only certain group of people can know how different kinds of crime are committed – in order to investigate them. Only few people can have access to personal data of facebook users. Only some workers of company are allowed to know the details of its business plan. Besides, there is a hard work behind every theory, survey, invention, writing, that’s why instead of sharing it for free, the authors can charge some fees. To sum it up, sharing information is crucial for us, especially now, in the epoch of incredibly fast internet and the same fast development. However, information can be dangerous, so we should be really careful while sharing it.

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Sharing of information

Today thanks to the means of internet and mass media everyone has an access to the information. Scientific articles, business strategies, academic materials – you can find everything  anything just by pressing the button search button in google. Information opens you endless possibilities for studying, work, and travelling. However, information is also a powerful instrument that can play a bad joke  role if it reaches wrong person.
I believe some information is really worth sharing. Everyone deserves to know how scientists are going to fight ageing, how fast food affects our brain, or how the current ecological situation influences our lives. Every student should be able to get as much information as possible on a topic he/she is interested in. The more knowledge this person gets, the better a professional he/she will become. Sharing information is important for scientific researchers as well: instead of inventing the bicycle for the 100th time, it’s better to tell the world about this invention and therefore work on possible improvements for this vehicle. Finally, it’s also useful for business: it’s easier to avoid mistakes when you’ve heard someone’s stories of creating a start-up or opening a new restaurant.
On the other hand, some information is really valuable and cannot  should not be shared to  with everyone. Only certain groups of people can  need to know how different kinds of crime are committed in order to investigate them. Only a few people can  should have access to the personal data of Facebook users. Only some workers  employees of a company are allowed to know the details of its business plan. Besides, there is a hard work behind every theory, survey, invention, writing. That’s why instead of sharing it for free, the authors can charge some fees.
To sum it up, sharing information is crucial for us, especially now, in the epoch of incredibly fast internet and the same fast development. However, information can be dangerous, so we should be really careful while sharing it.

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