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Some private schools charge parents tuition fees of up to £12,000 per year for their children to attend, but is the high cost of private education really worth it? Can free state schools provide an education which is just as valuable?
The choice between free state schools or private is one of important decision in a family for the future of their children and certainly for the finance of the family that has other expense to worry about.
Nowdays not all the families can afford the high cost of the tuition fees, for example families with more then two three children.
Certanily private schools offer a differentes and prepared services to their little learners with many activities to choice and an advanced teaching staffs well prepared, giving a big opportunities and a good value to the little learners. Making them a good firsts steps in the world.
But in the other hand the free state school can be one really good choice offering the possibilities to the families to saving their money and to give to their children a good education preparation for their future.
Then a right and thoughful choice for the families that have more the one children can be the free state school where the education service It is not that expencive as the private school.
In opinion if all of us will give the right consideration to the free state school this could be improved a lot offenring every year a better service.
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What do you think about my essay?
Some private schools charge parents tuition fees of up to £12,000 (some English private schools currently charge over £40,000 per year*) per year for their children to attend, but is the high cost of private education really worth it? Can free state schools provide an education which is just as valuable?The choice between state or private school is one of the more important decisions in a family, for the future of the children and certainly for the finances of the family that has other expenses to worry about.
Nowadays not all families can afford the high cost of school fees (all never could!), for example families with more then two or three children.
Certainly private schools offer a different service to their little learners, with many activities to choose from and an advanced, well prepared teaching staff, giving big opportunities and good value to the little learners. (Two instances of "little learners" close together is probably too much!) This makes them a good first step in the world.
But, on the other hand, state school (it feels clumsy to keep repeating "free" whenever you write "state") can be a really good choice, offering the possibility to families of saving their money and of giving their children a good education and preparation for their future.
So a right and thoughtful choice for families that have more than one child can be state school, where education is not as expensive as at private school.
In my opinion, if all of us were to give proper consideration to state schools, these could be improved a lot, offering a better service every year.
* https://thekingmaker.me/most-expenses-boarding-schools-in-uk/
* https://www.spectator.co.uk/2018/03/is-it-worth-it/
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What do you think about my essay?
Some private schools charge parents tuition fees of up to £12,000 per year for their children to attend, but is the high cost of private education really worth it? Can free state schools provide an education which is just as valuable?The choice between free state schools or private is one of the most important decisions in a family for the future of their children and certainly for the finances of the family that has other expenses to worry about.
Nowdays not all the families can afford the high cost of the tuition fees, for example families with more then two or three children.
Certainly private schools offer different prepared services to their little learners with many activities to choose and well prepared advanced teaching staffs, giving big opportunities and a good value to the little learners. This gives them good firsts steps in the world.
But on the other hand the free state school can be one really good choice offering the possibilities to the families of saving their money and giving to their children a good education preparation for their future.
Therefore a right and thoughful choice for the families that have more the one child can be the free state school where the education service is not that expensive as the private school.
In my opinion, if all of us will give the right consideration to the free state school this could be improved a lot by offering a better service every year.
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