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Can somebody correct this writing, please? For many years, people were used to breathing clear air. Nowadays, we have polluted air because of fumes from cars. What are we going to do about it? In this essay, I will adress this topic. The final paragraph will be focused on my recommendations Firstly, there are many ways in which we can improve the air. One of them is to stop using cars and start using bikes or other means of ecologic transport. However, many drivers and people would not manage to get to work in time. What's more, many people who have already bought a car would complain about it. I think that giving a free tickets for a public transport is a good way to sort this issue out. Another problem to talk about is congestion. We have many cars but only one man is inside. This results in terrible usage of space in cars. I would give an advertisement with some app for transport in order to reduce the waste of space. This app helps find some people who want to travel to the same place and can be taken as a passenger. I would say that both the previously mentioned suggestions are equally important. If we reduce the number of cars and start using them efficientluy, then we can reduce the air being polluted by us. I hope us to realise that the air we breath is necessary to be maintained and kept clean.

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Can somebody correct this writing, please?

For many years, people were used to breathing clear air. Nowadays, we have polluted air because of fumes from cars. What are we going to do about it? In this essay, I will address this topic. The final paragraph will be focused on my recommendations

Firstly, there are many ways in which we can improve the air. One of them is to stop using cars and start using bikes or other means of ecologic transport. However, many drivers and people would not manage to get to work in time. What's more, many people who have already bought a car would complain about it. I think that giving a free tickets for a public transport is a good way to sort this issue out.

Another problem to talk about is congestion. We have many cars but only one man is inside. This results in terrible usage of space in cars. I would give an advertisement with some app for transport in order to reduce the waste of space. This app helps find some people who want to travel to the same place and can be taken as a passenger.

I would say that both the previously mentioned suggestions are equally important. If we reduce the number of cars and start using them efficiently, then we can reduce the air being polluted by us. I hope us to realize that the air we breathe is necessary to be maintained and kept clean. 

Well done.

Keep it up.


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