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Why Japanese like foreigners
I am proud of Japan because it has a unique culture, such as Sushi, Sumo and so on. However, when I live in Canada, sometimes I feel Japanese people are different from people from other countries. I believe that Japan has some problems.Most Japanese are inclined to be shy. When I went to a party, international students enjoyed dancing a lot but the Japanese people, including me, did not do. We just watched and recorded the dance. Of course, I think although it depends on the individuals, Japanese habits lead to this result. We do not have many opportunities to dance. I have never gone dancing before. Thus, I envied Latino students, such as Brazilian and Mexican, who enjoyed dancing.
Additionally, I see Japanese people insecure because we worry about mistakes very much. While "we care about mistakes" is grammatically correct, "we worry about mistakes" sounds more natural.
According to newspapers, Japanese students tend to feel no confidence. Also, in my class, I am often awkward in front of classmates and we often think foreigners are better looking than us. That is why some Japanese hope to get married to foreigners. These examples show that Japanese people are insecure.
I appreciate Japanese culture. Japanese people always keep clean and polite. These habits are essential to Japanese people. I am proud of these. However, I hope to learn about different cultures because these make me broaden my horizons.
Good job! A nice piece of writing.
There's definitely some big culture shocks when it comes to Japanese culture compared to western culture. When I visited Japan, I was amazed by how clean and orderly things were, and I also always felt safe. These are things to take pride in, for sure! While all cultures have faults, there's a lot of things western people envy about Japan :)
Why Japanese like foreigners
I am proud of Japan because it has a unique culture, such as Sushi, Sumo and so on. However, when I live in Canada, sometimes I feel Japanese people are different from people from other countries. I believe that Japan has some problems.Most Japanese are inclined to be shy. When I went to a party, international students enjoyed dancing a lot but the Japanese people, including me, did not do. We just watched and recorded the dance. Of course, I think although it depends on the individuals, Japanese habits lead to this result. We do not have many opportunities to dance. I have never played dancing before. Thus, I envied Latino students, such as Brazilian and Mexican, enjoyed dancing.
Additionally, I see Japanese people insecure because we care about mistakes very much. According to newspapers, Japanese students tend to feel no confidence. Also, in my class, I am often awkward in front of classmates and we often think foreigners are better looking than us. That is why some Japanese hope to get married to foreigners. These examples express Japanese people are insecure.
I appreciate Japanese culture. Japanese always keep clean and polite. These habits are essential to Japanese. I am proud of these. However, I hope to learn about different cultures because these make me broaden my horizon.
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