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hello world this summer in russia is not so warm. but i like it. this summer i make my decision to go to europe and learn big data science and machine learning. now i choosing univesity. i hope it will be germany or french. and i hope i can go there with my daughter, but now i dont know how.

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hello world

This summer in Russia is not so warm, but i like it. This summer I make my decision to go to Europe and to learn big data science and machine learning. Now, I choose university. I hope it will be Germany (потому что это страна)  or France. I also hope I can go there with my daughter, but now i don't know how. 

Well done, молодец.

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This summer, in Russia is not so warm, but I like it. this summer I made my decision to go to Europe and learn big data science and machine learning*. Now, I am choosing a university. I hope it will be in Germany or France. and I hope I can go there with my daughter, but now I don't know how.

The pronoun I must be capitalized as well as the names of countryes and the beginning of  a sentence.
* what do you mean by machine learning?
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Germany or France for the countries. German or French for the languages, or cultural, produces etc. Are you going to Germany for French (things) ?
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this summer in russia is not so warm. but i like it. this summer i make my decision to go to europe and learn big data science and machine learning. now i choosing univesity. i hope it will be germany or french. and i hope i can go there with my daughter, but now i dont know how.

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