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About figure skating Is this speech natural? I'll be happy if you give me some advice:)

Yuzuru Hanyu is one of the most famous figure skater. I love his performance so much. Today I’m going to tell you about him.

First of all, I explain his attraction to you. Yuzuru is such a wonderful skater. When he was only 15 years old, he participates in the senior tournament for the first time and got the second prize. He looked younger a little than now. His skating skills are almost perfect, I think. He is good at all skill elements such as jumping, spinning, skating. In competitions, his jumps usually get high score because he jumps very high for long distance. And he is particular about each performance. That is why he has an incredible world record and won the Olympic games twice. A lot of figure skating fans and skaters look up to him deeply not only because his performance is beautiful but also because he is very kind, moderate and polite to everyone. In addition, his smile is so cute and charming that he is called “an angel” by some of his fans.

Next, I’ll show you my favorite skating program. Until a few years ago, it was not allowed that skaters used songs for competitions, which means music including human voice, but now they can use whatever music they like in both competitions and exhibitions. Thanks to this change of rule, I could encounter with the best skating program I’ve ever seen. In 2014, Yuzuru selected “the Phantom of the Opera” for his performance and I love it than anything else. In this program, Yuzuru expressed strong love and painful feeling of Phantom. Actually, I wanted to see it with you right now, but I’m sorry I cannot because I have no time to do. So, you should check it after the class!

In sum, I’ve talked about the attraction of Yuzuru. Are you getting interested in him or figure skating? If so, why don’t you go watching figure skating with me? Thank you for listening.

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About figure skating

Is this speech natural? I'll be happy if you give me some advice:)

Yuzuru Hanyu is one of the most famous figure skaters. I love his performance so much. Today I’m going to tell you about him.

First of all, I'll explain his appeal I explain his attraction to you. Yuzuru is such a wonderful skater. When he was only 15 years old, he participateds in the senior tournament for the first time and got the second place prize. He looked younger a little then than now. His skating skills are almost perfect, I think. He is good at all skill elements such as jumping, spinning, and skating. In competitions, his jumps usually get a high score because he jumps very high for long distances. And he is particular about each performance. That is why he has an incredible world record and won the Olympic games twice. A lot of figure skating fans and skaters look up to him deeply not only because his performance is beautiful but also because he is very kind, moderate modest and polite to everyone. In addition, his smile is so cute and charming that he is called “an angel” by some of his fans.

Next, I’ll show you my favorite skating program. Until a few years ago, it was not allowed that for skaters to used songs for competitions, which means music including songs that featured lyrics human voices, but now they can use whatever music they like in both competitions and exhibitions. Thanks to this change of in the rules, I could encounter with was able to witness the best skating program I’ve ever seen. In 2014, Yuzuru selected “the Phantom of the Opera” for his performance and I loved it more than anything else. In this program, Yuzuru expressed embodied the Phantom's strong emotions of love and painful feeling of Phantom. Actually, I wanted to see it with you right now, but I’m sorry I cannot because I have no time to do so. So, you should check it after the class!

In summary, I’ve talked about the attraction appeal of Yuzuru. Are you getting interested in him or figure skating? If so, why don’t you come go watching figure skating with me? Thank you for listening.

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Thank you for your article! I really enjoyed reading and now I know about such a wonderful person. I will definitely watch his performances

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