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Please, someone would correct this piece of writing In the curricula of the old schools, teachers were more interested in several important characters of the history. Meanwhile, they used to forget the role of vulgar people in the development of the past. In this essay I am going to write about which of these two group of people are more important and why. First and foremost, the majority of us have learnt history thinking that kings, great soldiers or scientifics lead the river of history without other forces. Therefore, their choices drawn our past. Although, this fact is not completely true because other forces, perhaps darker, pushed in one direction or in another one. It would be fair that we would not forget ordinary people in this role. Secondly, if all of us agree with this, we should discuss which weight of these two sides of the coin is. So, we need to find the balance of this fact. It is a well known fact that without the choices of several principal people history would have been completely different. However, it is true too, that when ordinary people push to one direction nobody can change it. In conclusion, I think we must study history without forgetting the two pillars in which the past leave if we want to be fair with ourselves.

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