How to deal with secrets?
I was chatting with a friend last night,he noticed my absence, I was thinking in my brother Daniel. He got sick 16 years ago.Sometimes when someone get well we start to forget and try to pretend that everything will be fine.I'm worry but I also strong.I always protect my family and every person I have loved.I love my brother too much.I am keeping in silence this fear deep into my soul.I want days pass so fast and then get sleep for a while until storm finish.My heart is broken and I am asking to God too many questions.No answer yet.Hope soon could understand better.[emoji]
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How to deal with secrets?
I was chatting with a friend last night, and he noticed my absence that I was not mentally present in the conversation ("absence" is correct but it implies that you were not present; I assume you mean that your mind was elsewhere). I was thinking in about (I'm currently learning Spanish and I understand that you use the form "pensar en", but the equivalent form in English would be "to think about") my brother Daniel. He got sick 16 years ago. Sometimes when someone get well after being sick we start to forget and try to pretend that everything will be fine. I'm worry worried but I am also strong. I always protect my family and every person I have that I love loved (you started the sentence off with the present tense, but then you switched to the past). I love my brother too much a lot ("too much" implies that you love him more than you should; an English speak would use "a lot" instead). I am keeping in silence hiding this my ("this" is correct but it sounds unnatural") fear deep into inside my soul. I want the days to pass so fast faster and then get sleep for a while until the storm finish goes away (you can say "finishes" but "goes away" sounds more natural). My heart is broken and I am asking to God too many questions. No answer yet. I hope that I will soon could understand better why this is happening. (The last sentence was wrong but I didn't totally understand what you wanted to convey so I hope that I've provided an appropriate substitute).Want to progress faster?
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