Search from various English teachers...
Hungary flagPálma Szilárd
IELTS writing essay With the help of internet, just clicking on a button enables humanity to find thousand of working opportunities in their country as well as abroad. It is considered by many that one should work in different workplaces, thus getting a clear picture of the labour market and its opportunities. Although this may be true, several people feel comfortable with their job and do not have the inclination to take the risk of losing this convenience. On the one hand, getting a job is difficult for recently graduated students because they have less experience, however were they find a lucrative job with company perks, promotion opportunities and pleasant environment, understandably they would not leave it. For instance, I have done and internship in a small start-up company and despite of the fact that I had low salary, I had the opportunity to observe how a company operates and gained experiences in management and webpage designing. On the other hand, provided that one have gathered different experiences along their life, they will be more valuable in the labour market because each position require different skills. In addition, working for certain organisations helps to build a good social network and have an idea of positions offered by companies. To conclude with, evaluating our job and position is the most important aspect. It should be realised when we are in a dead-end job or what we would like to achieve and make our decision according to these aspects. From my perspective one should definitely try out several positions to gain valuable experiences and to have knowledge about several organisations in labour market.

Corrections · 3

1

IELTS writing essay

With the help of the internet, just clicking on a button enables humanity one to find thousands of working opportunities in their country as well as abroad. It is considered by many that one should work in different workplaces, thus   which in turn results in getting a clear picture of the labor market and its opportunities. Although this may be true, several some people feel comfortable with their job and do not have the inclination to take the risk of losing this convenience.
On one hand, getting a job is difficult for recently graduated students because they have less experience. Therefre, where if they find a lucrative job with company perks, promotion opportunities, and pleasant environment, understandably they would not leave it. For instance, I have done an internship in a small start-up company and despite of the fact that I had a low salary, I had the opportunity to observe how a company operates and gained experiences in management and webpage designing.
On the other hand, different skills being required for different tasks, different people suite different jobs. After all, various experience results in various skills. In addition, working for certain organizations helps to build a good social network and have an idea of positions offered by companies.
To conclude with, evaluating our job and position is the most important aspect of our lives. It should be realized when we are in a dead-end job or what we would like to achieve and make our decision according to these aspects( I could not get your point.). From my perspective, one should definitely try out several positions to gain valuable experiences and to have knowledge about several organizations in labour market.

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today