THE SCHOOL CURRICULUM TODAY. IS IT NECCESSARY TO CHANGE IT
In the recent times, our society has been changing deeply, however, we have not transformed the curriculum of our school in the same way. This is the answer that we need to look for if we want to face to the future properly in order to achieve a better society. In this essay we will discuss what changes must be done and why.
First and foremost, the traditional subjects are not enough to respond to the needs of our present society. In this way, new subjects must be introduced in our school due to the fact that new knowledges have appeared in several fields of science and technology, such as internet, robots, etc.
Secondly, although, these new subjects are completely necessary ,we should not forget other areas of kwoledge which make our children should be better people. The human side of our students has to be, at least, as important as the economical point of view of the new subjects, which tend to focus in technological issues.
In conclusion, wven though, the curricula of our schools must be revised in order to add new subjects which mirror better the changes happened in our society, we do not forget that some of the old subjects develop the human side of our students too.
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THE SCHOOL CURRICULUM TODAY. IS IT NECCESSARY TO CHANGE IT
In the recent times, our society has been changing deeply, however, we have not transformed the curriculum of our school in the same way. This is the answer that we need to look for if we want to face to the future properly in order to achieve a better society. In this essay we will discuss what changes must be done and why.First and foremost, the traditional subjects are not enough to respond to the needs of our present society. In this way ("In this way" is not incorrect, but isn't necessary. You can start the sentence with "New subjects...), new subjects must be introduced in our school due to the fact that new knowledges have has appeared in several fields of science and technology, such as internet, robots, etc.
Secondly, although, these new subjects are completely necessary ,we should not forget other areas of kwoledge knowledge which should make our children should be better people. The human side of our students has to be, at least, as important as the economical point of view of the new subjects, which tend to focus in technological issues.
In conclusion, wven even though, the curricula of our schools must be revised in order to add new subjects which better mirror better the changes that have happened in our society, we do (rather than use the word "do", use of the words "should" or "must" may be better) not forget that some of the old subjects develop the human side of our students too.
*This is very well written and a great topic
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Thank you. I'm a teacher and too many times we tend to forget that our students are just children or teenagers.
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You have wtitten a very meaningful article. I agree with you completely. We need not just fill kids" heads with information (bigger part of which they will definitely forget) but to educate them as humans and future professionals aware of challenges of the modern world.
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