Ten sentences from my girlfriend.
My girlfriend wrote 10 sentences in Russian for me yesterday. Today I tried to translate in English. First five sentences with rule "never in Past Simple", when we want to say something didn't happen. The second five sentences is about very polite offer. When we use Negative form of Present simple and in the end use "do you?" I doubt about this rule, because Translater don't understand what I write :D And about sentences... I tried to save bright meaning)
1) He devoted one's life to science, but he never could learn the space inside him.(space inside him = understand yourself)
2) Sherry had a beautiful look, but she never got the role of those movie.
3) Garry always said that it's need to save health, appreciated the life, but he never can resist with dependence.(he has a dependence and the dependence killed him)
4) You wanted to conquer the scene of your voice, but you just never couldn't learn to to sing.
5) Every times, when I close my eyes, I waned to see your burning eyes, but just saw wasteland in smoke.
6) Did you see the night sky? You don't divide with me fallen comets from sky, do you?
7) You don't stay at home, do you? Would you like the hot coffee?
8) You are very interesting companion. You don't want to meet again, do you?
9) You don't want to dance a bit, do you? There is beautiful music.
10) We done this work perfect. You don't want to relax together, do you? I know the excellent café.
Исходные предложения:
1) Он всю жизнь посвятил науке, но так и не смог изучить космос внутри
2) Шери была прекрасно сложена, однако не получила роли в этом фильме.
3) Гарри всегда говорил, что нужно беречь здоровье, ценить свою жизнь, но сам так и не смог справиться со своей зависимостью.
4) Ты хотела покорить сцену своим голосом, только вот, так и не научилась петь.
5) Всякий раз, закрывая глаза, я хотел увидеть твои горящие глаза, а видел только пустошь в дыму.
6)Ты видел ночное небо? Может, разделишь со мной падающие с неба кометы?
7)Может, вы бы хотели остаться дома? Не хотите горячего кофе?
8)Вы очень интересный собеседник, не хотели бы вы увидеться снова?
9) Ты бы не хотела немного потанцевать? Здесь прекрасная музыка.
10) Мы прекрасно справились с этой работой, не хочешь немного отдохнуть вместе? Я знаю отличное кафе.
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Ten sentences from my girlfriend.
My girlfriend wrote 10 sentences in Russian for me yesterday. Today I tried to translate them into English. The first five sentences with using the rule "never in Past Simple", when we want to say something didn't happen. The second five sentences is are about very polite offers. When we use the negative form of present simple and in the end use "do you?" I have doubts about this rule, because the translator I used didn't don't understand what I write wrote :D And about sentences... I tried to save bright meaning)1) He devoted one's his life to science, but he could never could understand himself learn the space inside him.(space inside him = understand yourself)
2) Sherry had a beautiful look, but she never got the a role in the movies she auditioned for. of those movie.
3) Garry always said that it's necessary to be healthy need to save health, and appreciate d the life, but he could never can resist his addictions. with dependence.(he has a dependence and the dependence killed him)
4) You wanted to conquer the scene of your voice, but you could just never couldn't learn to to sing.
5) Every time s, when I close my eyes, I waned to see your burning eyes, but I just saw a wasteland in smoke.
6) Did you see the night sky? You don't divide with me fallen comets from sky, do you?
7) You don't stay at home, do you? You aren't staying home, are you? Would you like the hot coffee?
8) You are very interesting companion. You don't want to meet again, do you?
9) You don't want to dance a bit, do you? There is beautiful music playing.
10) We have done this work perfectly. You don't want to relax together, do you? I know the an excellent café.
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4) You wanted to conquer the stage with your voice, but you could just never learn to sing.
6) Did you see the night sky? Would you share the falling comets with me?
Остальные исправления сделала Sarah H.
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Если можно, напишите, пожалуйста, исходные предложения на русском, иначе не везде понятно, что в них подразумевается.
Отрицание + "do you?" не имеет оттенка вежливой просьбы в английском, это скорее просто подтверждение отрицания. "You don't want to dance, do you?" = "Похоже, ты не хочешь танцевать?"
Если мы хотим предложить что-то, лучше использовать "Would you".
"Ты не хотела бы потанцевать?" / "Не хочешь потанцевать?" = Would you like to dance?"
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Hey bro, I know english like a child having 3 years, but,,,,,,,,,,,,your method is worst, You are spending time with one way no good, Never translate, never, You need foccus, Example.........How do you say, To take a wash in Russian......? You need to practice learning phrases, .........real phrases,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,example, when you are watching a movie, take the best phrases, note down, listen, repeat, repeat, write, but............use just real phrase, , I think it will help you.................Your method, doesnt work........
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