7/7 english
On Saturday,I went to a pub to watch a game,”England and Sweden”,with my friends.
There were plenty of people and it was hard to stand.
It was really exciting when England got a goal.
After the game also finished,Manchester was very crowded.
After that, we went to Japanese restaurant,”SAMSI”.
Actually,I went there yesterday as well.hahaha
This time,I went there for the third time.
Then, we were enjoying a night .
However, my english skill is poor, so I have always been helped by my friend,”Frank”.
He lives and works in Leeds. Probably, he has stayed there for 10years.
I can explain how we knew each other.
We used same application,”italki”.
That’s why we knew each other online on “italki”.
His english skill is very good!!
So,I want to speak english like him.
From now,I want to talk with him over the phone as possible as.
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7/7 english
On Saturday, I went to a pub to watch the game,”England vs Sweden”, with my friends.There were plenty of people and it was hard to stand.
It was really exciting when England got a goal.
After the game also finished, Manchester was very crowded.
After that, we went to a Japanese restaurant,”SAMSI”.
I actually went there yesterday as well.hahaha
This time, I went there for the third time.
Then, we were enjoying a night out.
However, I can't speak English fluently, so my friend, Frank always helps me.
He lives and works in Leeds. He has lived there for 10 years.
I can explain how we met.
We used the same application called Italki.
That’s how we met each other online on “italki”.
He speaks English fluently.
So, I want to speak English like him.
From now on, I want to talk with him over the phone as much possible as.
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1) On Saturday,I went to a pub to watch a the game between England and Sweden with my friends.
> Always put "the" infront of the subject of the sentence.
> I saw the boy.
> I was afraid of the rain.
> " " is not required.
2) There were plenty of people and it was hard to find a place to stand.
> Hard to stand is like e.g dizzy, nauseous and you find it hard to stand up.
3) It was really exciting when England got scored a goal.4) After the game also finished, Manchester was became very crowded.
5) After that, we went to this Japanese restaurant called ”SAMSI”.
6) Actually, I went there yesterday as well.hahaha
7) This time,I went there for the third time. Today is the third time I went there.
8) Then Afterwards, we were enjoying a the night .
9) However, as my English skill is poor, so I have always been helped by my friend Frank always helps me.
> You can use " " if you say something like "my friend by the name of "Frank"."
> Just "My friend Frank" alone will not require " ".
10 ) He lives and works in Leeds. Probably, He has probably stayed there for 10 years.
11) I can explain how we knew know/met each other.
12) We used the same application called ”italki”.
> Similar to point number (1) and (9).
> E.g We used the same application Italki OR We used the same application called "Italki" > correct use of " "
13) That’s why how we knew each other online on “italki”.
14) His english skill is very good!!
15) So,I want to speak English just like him.
16) From now, I want to talk with him over the phone as much as possible as.
Hope this helps! ^^
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7/7 english
On Saturday, I went to a pub to watch a the game, England and Sweden game with my friends.There were plenty of people and it was hard to stand.
It was really exciting when England got a scored goal.
After the game also finished, Manchester was very crowded.
After that, we went to Japanese restaurant, ”SAMSI”.
Actually, I went there yesterday as well. hahaha
This time, I went there for the third time.
Then, we were enjoying a night . (Either the night or a night out)
However, my I speak English poorly skill is poor, so I have always been helped by my friend Frank always helps me
He lives and works in Leeds. Probably, He has probably stayed lived there for 10 years.
I can explain how we knew met each other.
We used same application, called ”italki”.
That’s why how we knew met each other online on “italki”.
His english skill is very good!! He speaks English very well!!
So, I want to speak English like him.
From now on, I want to talk with him over the phone as much possible as.
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