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The Universe Our solar system is a small part of a much larger group of star and planets,called the Galaxy or the Milky Way.In the solar system there are eight planets go around the sun.They are Mercury,Venus,Earth,Mars,Jupiter,Saturn,Neptune and Uranus.(I don't know if Pluto is a planet)Scientists have sent spaceships to the planet Mars even outside the solar system to take photo.However,we haven't found life on any other planet yet.With so many stars in the universe,are we alone,or is there life out there in space?

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The Universe

Our solar system is a small part of a much larger group of stars and planets, called a galaxy, of which ours is named the 'Milky Way'. In our solar system, there are eight planets going around a sun. They are Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Neptune, and Uranus (I don't know if Pluto is a planet or not). Scientists have sent spaceships to the planet Mars and even outside the solar system to take photos. However, we haven't found life on any other planet yet. With so many stars in the universe, are we alone? Or is there life out there in space?


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Be careful with your spaces between punctuation marks.

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Nicholas

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Our solar system is a small part of a much larger group of star and planets, called the Milky Way Galaxy. In the solar system there are eight planets that revolve around the sun. They are Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Neptune and Uranus.(I don't know if Pluto is a planet) Scientists have sent spaceships to the planet Mars and even outside the solar system to take photos.However, we haven't found life on any other planet/s yet. With so many stars and planets in the universe. Are we alone? Or is there life out there in space?
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The Universe

Our solar system is a small part of a much larger group of stars and planets, called the Galaxy or the Milky Way.  In the solar system there are eight planets which go around the sun.  (better:  which rotate around the sun)  They are Mercury, Venus, Earth, Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Neptune and Uranus.(I don't know if Pluto is a planet)  Scientists have sent spaceships to the planet Mars; even outside the solar system to take photographs. However, we haven't found life on any other planet yet.  With so many stars in the universe, are we alone, or is there life out there in space?

You write very well!  Suggestion:  put a space after a comma.  Put two spaces after a period which ends a sentence.


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