About my dream!!!
Ok, my name is Eugene, I live in Voronezh, Russia. I have a dream: I dream to visit Canada. Why? I want to tell you about this.
One day someone gave me the postcards with very beautiful pictuiers. I saw there cities, forests, lakes, a lot of lakes, mountain and some animals. On the back of the postcards was written: Canada - the best country of the world.
It happened a lot time ago when I was 10 years old. A couple of years later I found a book in a bookcase of my parents. It was 'Two little savages' by Ernest Thompson Seton. This story about two Canadian's boys who wanted to be like indians...
There were a lot of books after one about Australia, USA, Russia, UK and ect but my heart has been belonging to Canada since that moment.
And now, when we have an Internet, YouTube and TV, I open a lot of facts about Canada and all this like me more and more.
Yes, there are a lot of beautiful places and wonbeful books in my country and I must be a patriot but now I fall in love with Canada and nothing else matters.
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About my Dream! (Capitalize your titles! It draws more readers, reviewers, etc. It makes your work look as if it was the front page headlines on a national newspaper.)
My name is Eugene and I live in Voronezh, Russia. I have a dream: I dreamed of visiting Canada. Why? I want to tell you about this.One day someone gave me a postcards with very beautiful pictures. I saw there cities, forests, lakes, a lot of lakes, mountain and some animals. On the back of the postcard was written: Canada - the best country in the world.
It happened a lot time ago when I was 10 years old. A couple of years later I found a book in a bookcase of my parents. It was 'Two Little Savages' by Ernest Thompson Seton. This story is about two Canadian boys who wanted to be like Indians...
There were a lot of books after, one about Australia, USA, Russia, UK and etc. but my heart has been belonging to Canada since that moment.
And now, when we have an Internet, YouTube and TV, I read a lot of facts about Canada and all this I like me more and more.
Yes, there are a lot of beautiful places and wonderful books in my country and I must be a patriot but now I fall in love with Canada and nothing else matters.
You wrote an interesting text. Remember that Canada isn't Shangri-La, the fictional place described in the 1933 novel Lost Horizon by British author James Hilton. However, it's OK. Depending in what part you live in, you can do well enough. Keep writing.
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