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Mi velocidad de digestivo es lentisimo! Mi velocidad de digestivo es lentisimo!

normalmente, nessesito tres días para digerir pepinos, lechugas, el blanco parte de hueves etc...¡Que absurdo! Entonces, quand las alimentos están digiriendo, mi parecer como una mujer embarazada por tres meses.

Pero quanfo todo han digiriendo, me parece como un model.

My digestion speed is super slow

Normally I need 3 days to digest cucumbers, lettuces, egg whites etc... How ridiculous! So when the foods are being digested, I look like a 3 month pregnant woman.

However when everything has been digested, I look like a model :)

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Mi velocidad de digestión es lentísima!

Mi velocidad de digestión es lentísima!

Normalmente, necesito tres días para digerir los pepinos, las lechugas y la parte blanca de los huevos etc...¡Qué absurdo! Entonces  Cuando los alimentos se están digiriendo, me parezco a una mujer embarazada de tres meses.

Pero cuando todo se han digerido, me parezco a una modelo.

My digestion speed is super slow

Normally I need 3 days to digest cucumbers, lettuces, egg whites etc... How ridiculous! So when the foods are being digested, I look like a 3 month pregnant woman.

However when everything has been digested, I look like a model :)

The text is very easy! I understand both texts and I can assure you that my translation is perfect. But, there's something that could be conveyed in a better way in spanish:


Cuando estoy digiriendo, los alimentos se están digiriendo, me parezco a una mujer embarazada de tres meses.

Pero cuando ya he digerido todo todo se han digerido, me parezco a una modelo.

The last, is most common and correct in the spanish, but the other way is ok too. 

My english writing is not very good, but I understand when I read texts.

Bonus:

When you'll want referencing of  "la parte blanca de los huevos" you only should say "la clara de los huevos"

In spanish, we called to eggs's white part "CLARA", and "YEMA" to the yellow part (the core). We usually not use the colors to do referencings. 

The word "clara" has too another meaning, because it's a female name. But in this context, is the white part of the eggs. 

I hope you could understand my english text, I need improve it yet!



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Mi digestión es lentisima!

Normalmente, necesito tres días para digerir pepinos, lechugas, la clara del huevo etc...¡Qué absurdo! Entonces, cuando los alimentos están siendo digeridos, me veo como una mujer de 3 meses de embarazo.

Aunque cuando he digerido todo, me siento una modelo!

My digestion speed is super slow

Normally I need 3 days to digest cucumbers, lettuces, egg whites etc... How ridiculous! So when the foods are being digested, I look like a 3 month pregnant woman.

However when everything has been digested, I look like a model :)

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Puede signifcar que tengas alergias a unas comidas. Te recomiendo ir al doctor y hacer una prueba de alergias a ver si es cierto.
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Si necesitas ayuda en espańol, contactame!!

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