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May I ask if you could help correct any grammar errors and leave a comment for quality of sentences? Blur: He gradually feels himself being weaker and weaker, so is his eyesight, and the image of things before him starts to blur. Elicit: Teachers should try to employ a variety of teaching strategies in order to elicit maximum responses from their students. Disheveled: After spending three days working in his laboratory, Jim comes out with a very disheveled and tired appearance. Laugh off: Each time someone asks Mike the monk how he manages to bear a life without any tastes, he just laugh off those questions naturally and strolls away. Propel: It's said that the rocket there needs not to be propelled by any source of fuels. It can goes up on its own with a greenish-shimmering flame. How strange it is!

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Blur:

He gradually felt himself becoming weaker and weaker, his eyesight, and the image of things before him began to blur.

Elicit:

Teachers should try to employ a variety of teaching strategies in order to elicit maximum responses from their students.


Disheveled:

After spending three days working in his laboratory, Jim comes out with a very disheveled and tired appearance.


Laugh off:

Each time someone asks Mike the monk how he manages to bear a life without being able to taste anything, he just laugh off those questions naturally and strolls away.

 (Are you talking about the sense of taste here?)

Propel:

It's said that rocket there does not need to be propelled by a fuel source. It can go up on its own with a greenish-shimmering flame. How strange it is!

Hope this helps. I have been at work all day so I might have missed some errors. All in all you have a firm grasp of English. The content of your sentences shows you understood the vocabulary.


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