My Way, My Life..!!
I am going to share you about my previous day..!
It was 7'O clock. When the mobile rang alarm. I woke up and thought will I have to go to office again? than, got up as usual. Brushed my teeth. I went to take a bath. afterwards I took breakfast. Do you know what I took in breakfast? It was just a cup of tea with a bread. After taking breakfast. I said good bye to my mom and went downstairs to the car porch.. No.. No.. I haven't any car. I have a motor bike. I cleaned my bike with a piece of cloth. After all I started my bike. and stood up for a minute to warm my bike. When bike warmed I went to office.
I spent 08 hours at the office. worked passionately. and waited for leaving the office at 05:00pm. When the time reached to 05:00pm. I left my office. and started my bike to go to home.
I think it is enough for the first entry.. Please do corrections. Thanks for you time..!!
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My Way, My Life..!!
I am going to share with you about my previous day..! (optional = about my previous day what I did yesterday)It was 7'O clock when the mobile alarm rang. I woke up and thought, will I have to go to the office again? then, I got up as usual. I brushed my teeth. I went to take a bath. Afterwards I took my breakfast. Do you know what I took for my breakfast? It was just a cup of tea with a piece of bread. After taking breakfast, I said good bye to my mom and went downstairs to the car porch (optional = porch garage) No.. No.. I haven't any car. I have a motor bike. I cleaned my bike with a piece of cloth. After all that I started my bike and stood it up for a minute to warm my bike up .When my bike had warmed up I went to office.
I spent 08 hours at the office. I worked passionately and waited to leave the office at 05:00pm. When the time reached to 05:00pm, I left my office and started my bike to go to home.
I think it is enough for the first entry.. Please do corrections. Thanks for you time..!!
COMMENTS:
Really well done, I understand everything you wrote. If you have any questions, feel free to ask :)
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