Happy birthday
“You are nine years old.”I said to myself when I wactched you lighting the birthday candles. Time is like wind, which we can feel but can’t catch .
The day you were born,I sit out of the delivery room anxiously as far as the nurse came out and said “A boy,3.35kg….” I can’t even hear the nurse because your crying seems to shock the whole world.The one thing I can remember is that my tears overflow and I could not say anything when I saw you first time.
Being a young father, I need to study as well as you, even study eating and playing , everything concerned you became to be a subject, and I tried my best to be excellent in these subjects, although that is not easy. At the same time, accompanying you to grow up is the most important thing to me. I remember that you begged me to play toy bricks with you in the midnight, you told a cartoon story to me voluntarily, you cried and asked me to came back when you were ill, and remember the sad expression in your eyes which could melt me totally when you went to kindergarten first time….
May be, you couldn’t understand why Father didn’t spoiled me any more. Because paternal love was restrained , solemn and means responsibility. Whatever, I hope you could know, that I will love you forever.
Sooner or later, you will really have your own friends, have your own hobbies,and you will forget your childhood gradually.But for me, the longer time it pass , the more deeply I miss your childhood.
Happy birthday!
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Happy birthday
“You are nine years old.” I said to myself when I watched you light the birthday candles. Time is like the wind, which we can feel but can’t catch. The day you were born, I sat outside the delivery room waiting anxiously for the nurse to come out and say “A boy, 3.35kg….” I could not even hear the nurse because your crying seemed to shock the whole world. The one thing I can remember is that my tears overflowed and I could not say anything when I saw you for the first time.Being a young father, I need to study as well as you, even study eating and playing , everything concerning you became to be a subject, and I tried my best to excel in these subjects, although that was not easy. At the same time, accompanying you to grow up is most important to me. I remember that you begged me to play toy bricks with you at midnight, you told a cartoon story to me voluntarily, you cried and asked me to came back when you were ill, and I remember the sad expression in your eyes which could melt me totally when you went to kindergarten for the first time….
Maybe you couldn’t understand why father didn’t spoiled you any more. Because paternal love was restrained , solemn and means responsibility. Whatever, I hope you know that I will love you forever.
Sooner or later, you will really have your own friends, have your own hobbies, and you will forget your childhood gradually. But for me, the longer it passes , the more deeply I miss your childhood.
Happy birthday!
very well written!
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