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Chinchilla as a pet Chinchillas are adorable pet! I am one of the happy chinchilla's owner. It has a very pretty face. Its fur is the most mildly in the world & so chinchilla's fur requires specific care. For example, it can't swim in water, because its fur will be damage, it takes only a specific sand bath, like a small bird. It's looking so pretty & funny. Also, all chinchillas are vegetarian. It follows a stringent diet: no nuts, no sweets, no fresh vegetables or berries, no meat. It eats only dry pressed grass, dry carrot and dry barries, like a raspberry or dogrose. It is so small and highly (or better use "rather"?) wild, but it understands kindness and weasel. Below I attach a pretty photo from the internet. It's mother with her puppy ♥ Waiting for your edits

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Chinchilla as a pet

Chinchillas are adorable pets ! I am one of the happy owners of chinchilla's owner. It has a very pretty face. Its fur is the [most mildly soft ]/softest in the world & so a chinchilla's fur [requires specific care]/needs to be well looked after. For example, it can't swim in water, because its fur will be damaged, it takes only a [specific]/certain kind of sand bath, like a small bird. It's looking It looks so pretty & funny.

Also, all chinchillas are vegetarian. It follows a [stringent]/strict diet: no nuts, no sweets, no fresh vegetables or *berries, no meat. It eats only dry pressed grass, dry carrot and dry berries, like a raspberry or dogrose.  *Surely, wild berries are 'fresh' ?  There must be some naturally-occurring plant in its native habitat that provides its main source of food.

It is so small and [highly (or better use "rather"?) wild]/*undomesticated, but it understands kindness and [weasel ? ].
Below I attach a pretty photo from the internet. It's a mother with her young puppy ♥

* i.e. not used to living with, and being handled by people

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Chinchilla as a pet

Chinchillas are adorable pets! I am one of the happy chinchilla's owners. It has a very pretty face. It's fur is the most mildly softest in the world & so a chinchilla's fur requires specific care. For example, it can't swim in water, because it's fur will be damaged, it takes only a specific kind of sand bath, like a small bird. It's looks so pretty & funny.

Also, all chinchillas are vegetarian. It follows a stringent diet: no nuts, no sweets, no fresh vegetables or berries and no meat. It eats only dry pressed grass, dry carrot and dry berries, like a raspberry or dog rose.

It is so small and rather wild, but it understands kindness and weasel [weasel doesn't make sense here, did you mean weasely? if so, 'is weasely'. It's not a compliment though].
Below I have attached a pretty photo from the internet. It's a mother with her puppy [A baby weasel is called a 'kit']

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Ты молодец. У тебя есть классное домашнее животное. Продолжайте хорошо работать с английским языком.

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Nice!
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As I know, chinchillas lives in over the world but are​ so rare pat. They come from Andes (South's America). It is an individual kind. I can compare chinchilla rather with squirrel or mouse.
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since I am not familiar with Chinchillas, is it a kind of rabbit? and i wondering if this kind more familiar in some region?

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