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My local city I live in a historic city called Pamplona. It is famous around the world for its "San Fermin" parties and because is a very beautiful city which historic centre is surrounded by walls. There are many attractions to visit. On the one hand, iIf you want to eat a tasty "pintxo" you should go to Estafeta Street. There are a lot of bars and restaurants with a variety of meals. This place is always crouded but in a perfect atmosphere. On the other hand, you should visit the walls enjoying with a breath taking views of the city and walking through narrow cobblestone streets, visiting the Santa Maria´s Cathedral, or walking along the Encierro´s street finishing in the bullring. I love living in Pamplona for the reason that is a calm city where you can walk in a lot of green areas, degusting the best meals of Spain and walking through its streets. I would recommend to anyone who appreciates little and historical cities.

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My Local City

I live in a historic city called Pamplona. It is famous around the world for its "San Fermin" parties and because it is a very beautiful city which has a historic centre is surrounded by walls.

There are many attractions to visit. On the one hand, if you want to eat a tasty "pintxo", you should go to Estafeta Street. There are a lot of bars and restaurants with a variety of meals. This place is always crowded but in has a perfect atmosphere.

On the other hand, you should visit the walls to enjoy enjoying with breathtaking views of the city and walking through narrow cobblestone streets, visiting the Santa Maria´s Cathedral, or walking along the streets used in the Encierro which ends finishing in the bullring.

I love living in Pamplona for the reason that as it is a calm city where you can walk in a lot of green areas, degusting tasting the best meals of Spain and walking through its streets. I would recommend Pamplona to anyone who appreciates little and #historical cities.

Hi Iñaki Irigaray,

I hope I have not changed your original meaning when I edited your work. Just as a side comment:

# "Historic" means something that has famous or has particular significance in history. "Historical" means something that took place in the past, regardless of importance. 

I hope this helps. 

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