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Ielts writing task 4 The diagrams below illustrate the alterations and constructions built at West Park Seconday School since its establishment in 1950. In general, it is striking that over the past years the secondary school has been significantly expanded with new blocks, for instance with a sport field. The playground next to the school has been remained as it was in 1950. Comparing 1950 with 1980 new constructions can be noticed; houses on the left has been removed and a small parking lot with a science block attached to the school was built between this period of time. Another alteration is that instead of a farmland a sport field is on the south-West of the school. If we make a comparison between 1980 and 2010 a remarkable expansion of the parking lot is illustrated at the expense of the large sport field, probably because during that period of time cars have spread worldwidely.

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Ielts writing task 4

The diagrams below illustrate the alterations and constructions built at West Park Seconday School since its establishment in 1950.
In general, it is striking that over the past years the secondary school has been significantly expanded with new blocks features, for instance with a sport field. The playground next to the school has been remained as it was in 1950. (The field actually appears to be smaller in 2010 than in 1950?) 
Comparing 1950 with 1980 new constructions can be noted noticed; houses on the left has have been removed and a small parking lot with a science block attached to the school was built between during this period of time. Another alteration is that instead of a farmland, a sport field is on the south-West of the school.
If we make a comparison between 1980 and 2010 a remarkable expansion of the parking lot is illustrated at the expense of the large sport field, probably because during that period of time use and ownership of cars have increased spread worldwidely.

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