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You never know what’ll happen the next moment. Whenever you dive into the ocean of calmness, your world is perfectly aligned, carrying on peacefully and seamlessly, eventually out of nowhere your so called perfactly balanced life falls apart. You never expected that moment neither planned it but it happened. Who can stop the coming moment? Alas! No one. Nobody can change what’s written in fate.
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You never know what’ll happen in the next moment. Whenever you dive into the ocean of calmness, your world is perfectly aligned, carrying on peacefully and seamlessly, (need a conjunction, semi colon, or full stop here) eventually out of nowhere your so called perfectly balanced life falls apart. You never expected that moment, neither planned it, but it happened. Who can stop the coming moment? Alas! No one. Nobody can change what’s written in fate.Thumbs up!
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You never know what’ll happen the next moment. Whenever you dive into the ocean of calmness, your world is perfectly aligned, carrying on peacefully and seamlessly, eventually out of nowhere your so called perfactly balanced life falls apart. You never expected that moment neither planned it but it happened. Who can stop the coming moment? Alas! No one. Nobody can change what’s written in fate.
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