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embarrassment i have taken a part-time job to support my life days ago, and i have worked for a long time ,but today ,something happened which make me really embarrassed. today ,i feel a little sick, and after a whole day standing , i queit tired. i watched my watch that six'o clock , then ,i call it a day. actually, time for me to leave is seven'o clock. i don't know what happened to me that time. Then the manager call me and tell me that i leave earlier than i should. i am so sorry for my careless.

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embarrassment Embarrassment [the title of your story has  to start with a CAPITAL letter]

i have taken a part-time job to support my life days ago, and i have worked for a long time ,but today ,something happened which make made me really embarrassed.

today ,i feel felt a little sick, and after a whole day standing , i queit was quite tired.
 
i watched my watch that six'o clock  I looked at my watch and saw that it was six o'clock / I looked at my watch and it was six o'clock, then ,i call called it a day.
 
actually, the right time for me to leave is was seven'o clock.
 
i don't know what happened to me at that time.

Then the manager call called me and tell told me that i leave was leaving/left earlier than i should.

i am so sorry for my careless.

Mara - most of the verbs in your story should be in the past tense (tense = time) because you are telling us a story that has already finished, so everything that happened happened in the past. Crazy English verbs... :)

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