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Felicia
Is it always a good thing to work hard? In my previous experiences, there are free main reasons that cause people to study or work hard. One key factor is that people are usually under pressure from their surrounding person. Some people at a higher position in the company are asked for higher responsibility and wish to meet the standard from stakeholder such as their boss. On the other hand, there are people who think hard work is a key factor to achieve higher position and gain more money that can create a new life for themselves. Finally, it seems that some people are more driven just because they found the passionate subject; people who love their work and doesn’t notice the effort they make.

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Is it always a good thing to work hard?

In my previous experiences, there are free three*1 main reasons that cause people to study or work hard.
One key factor is that people are usually under pressure from their surrounding person *2. People  in a higher position in the company are asked to take on*3 more responsibility and wish to meet the high standards set by*4 stakeholder such as their boss. On the other*5 hand, there are people who think hard work is a key factor for achieving a higher position and gaining more money that can create a new life for themselves. Finally, it seems that some people are more driven just because they found a subject that they are passionate about; people who love their work and don't worry about working too hard.


*1 - free - you don't have to pay for something / three - 3

*2 - you could say: 'the people around them' OR 'their peers'

*3 - take on - means to carry 

*4 - to meet the targets / to meet the high standards / to meet the expectations

*5 - Earlier on in the essay you could use 'on the one hand' EG on the one hand, many people are usually under pressure... On the other hand there are people who think that...


Well done! This was a nice concise piece.

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