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Which is your favourite sport? Which is your favourite sport? People often think about discover a different sport. In my opinion, the best sport that you can practice is cycling. I had never practiced it, but one day I decided to do on bike the "Camino de Santiago", an ancient way where all over the world Christian people walked to the cathedral of Santiago de Compostela to remove their sins. Nowadays people still doing it how a religious or touristic reason and in my case having a nice holidays enjoying and doing sport. Go cycling gives you the wonderful blend between do a lot of exercise and delight with nature. It allows watch the landscape or wildlife as practice a hard and exciting training session, in contrast with another complete sports as swim, tennis or football. I think that people should take up cycling because they will discover a gratifying sport.

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What is your Favourite Sport?

What is your favourite sport?
People often think about trying different sports. In my opinion, the best sport that you can practice is cycling.
I had never practiced it, but one day I decided to ride a bike on "Camino de Santiago", an ancient road, which all over the world Christians people from all over the world walked on to get to the cathedral of Santiago de Compostela, in order to have their sins forgiven. Nowadays, people still doing it, whether for a religious or touristic reasons and in my case, having a nice holidays enjoying and doing sports.

Cycling gives you a wonderful blend of do a lot of exercise and enjoying the delight with nature. It allows you to watch the landscape and wildlife during a hard yet exciting training session, in contrast to another complete sports, such as swimming, tennis and football.

I think that people should try cycling, because they will discover it to be a gratifying sport.
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Corrections: Part 2

Go Cycling gives you the a wonderful blend {better: mix, balance} between doing a lot of exercise and delight appreciating/enjoying {or communing with} with nature. It allows watch you to view*** the landscape or wildlife as well as practice do a hard and exciting training. session, in contrast with another complete sports as swim, tennis or football.
I think that people should take up cycling because they will discover a gratifying sport.


***We "watch" TV, but "view" landscapes, horizons, cityscapes.

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Corrections: Part 1

Which {better: What} Is Your Favourite Sport? {Main words in titles are capitalized in English composition}

Which {What} Is Your Favourite Sport?
People often think about discover trying on/out a different sport. In my opinion, the best sport that you can practice do is cycling.*
I have never practiced done it, but one day, I decided to do on bike the "Camino de Santiago", an ancient way {better: route, road, path} where Christians all over the world Christian people walked to the cathedral of Santiago de Compostela to remove expiate** {more accurate: atone for} their sins. Nowadays, people still doing it how a for religious or touristic reasons and, in my case, to have a nice holidays enjoying and doing sports.


*"Practicar deportes" is "to do sports" (UK) or "play sports" (US), not "practice" sports.

**Sin is "expiated" (we don't say "remove sin"), but really, this is a pilgrimage to atone for sins. {i.e. to be sorry for them and renew one's faith}


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