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How to be a good parent. How to be a good parent: Which is the best way to educate your children? There are a lot of discrepancies about children education. On one hand, some families thinks that the best way to educate is teaching manners with a lot of rules and being strict. Usually they take their children to private schools where is very important follow rules and the education in values. On the other hand, there are people who think that rules are an obstacle for their children development. So, they believes that children need to discover themselves their own mistakes because it helps in self-learning. In conclusion, I believe that education should be a mix of both thoughts. I think children need rules to start learning and them they discover their mistakes.

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How to be a good parent.

How to be a good parent:

Which is the best way to educate your children? There are a lot of discrepancies about children's education.

On the one hand, some families thinks that the best way to educate is teaching manners with a lot of rules and being strict. Usually they usually take send their children to private schools, where it is very important to follow rules and the education in values.

On the other hand, there are people who think that rules are an obstacle for their children's development. So, they believes that children need to discover themselves their own mistakes since they can improve their self-learning this way / because it helps in self-learning.

In conclusion, I believe that education should be a mix of both thoughts. I think children need rules to start learning and them then, they will be able to discover their mistakes.


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How to be a good parent.

How to be a good parent:

Which is the best way to educate your children? There are a lot of discrepancies about children's education.

On one hand, some families thinks that the best way to educate is teaching manners with a lot of rules and being strict. Usually they take send their children to private schools where it is very important to follow rules and the education in values.

On the other hand, there are people who think that rules are an obstacle for their children's development. So, they believes that children need to discover themselves their own mistakes because it helps in self-learning.

In conclusion, I believe that education should be a mix of both thoughts. I think children need rules to start learning and then they discover their mistakes.

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