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About me. Hello! I'm a girl. I'm 21 years old. I'm from Russia and I'm a feminist. I love animals and nature. I want to be a vegetarian. I like to read book, listen to music and make photos.

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About me.

Hello!
*I'm a [girl. I'm] 21 years old. girl [I'm] from Russia and I'm a feminist. I love animals and nature. and I want to be a vegetarian. I like to read books, listen to music and take photos.

*I'm a 21-year-old girl from Russia . .   Linking the short sentences together makes it sound more natural.

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About me

Hello!
I'm a girl. I'm 21 years old. I'm from Russia and I'm a feminist. I love animals and nature. I want to be a vegetarian. I like to read books, listen to music and take photos.

Hello! :) 

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