Fin de semana.
Hello. Today I`m talk about my weekend, by the way very short. On Saturday I went to Los Majuelos, my litte son play football.
He plays, on the Chenet, in Armeñime. Your position is defense and the your numbers is 3. I love watching him play, but I get very nervous, because I`m afraid of being hit.
This year, they have been champions. The next year, It will be more difficult.
On Sunday I work and we went to the football dinner.
One Weekend complet, I need to sleep more, but fine.
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Fin de semana.
Hello. Today I`m talking(writing?) about my weekend, which by the way was very short. On Saturday I went to Los Majuelos to watch my little son play football.He was playing on the Chenet, in Armeñime. He was playing in defence, and wearing shirt number 3. I love watching him play, but I get very nervous because I`m afraid of being hit.
This year, his team are the champions. Next year, it will be more difficult.
On Sunday I worked, and we went to a football dinner.
One weekend over. I need to sleep more, but I'm fine.
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Fin de semana.
Hello. Today I'm talking about my weekend, by the way it is very short. On Saturday I went to Los Majuelos, my little son played football.He plays, on the Chenet, in Armeñime. His position is defense and his numbers is 3. I love watching him play, but I get very nervous, because I'm afraid of being hit.
This year, they have been champions. The next year, it will be more difficult.
On Sunday I worked and we went to the football dinner.
One Weekend complete, I need to sleep more, but I am fine.
Really good, clear and easy to follow. Only minor issues such as saying 'your' when you meant 'his' (your son's position in the team.)
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