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Weekend in Paris - pt2 It was my last night in Paris and the next day I had the train to get back home.

My girlfriend and me watched a film and afterwards we went to bed early.

Suddenly started a sound like the hell and we woke up; the fire alarms went off in the room.

I lean over the bed to catch my phone and watch the time; it was the 2.20AM.

After few minutes we realized that the alarms went off in the whole hotel, so we put on some clothes, we have taken the dog and set off the room.

We went downstairs and there were the other guests in the hall.

The receptionist was calling the security services to figure out what hell was happening.

After waiting 20 minutes the receptions reassured us explaining that someone in the hotel had triggered the alarm in his room, but everything was fine and he let us go back upstairs to get to sleep.

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Weekend in Paris - pt2

It was my last night in Paris and the next day I had to catch the train to go home.

My girlfriend and I watched a film, afterwards we went to bed early.

Suddenly a loud sound alarmed us, we noticed the fire alarms had started ringing in our room.

I leant over the bed to look at  my phone and see the time; it was the 2.20AM.

After a few minutes we realized that the alarms were ringing throughout the hotel, so we put on some clothes, we took the dog and set off  out the room.

We went downstairs and there were the other guests in the hall.

The receptionist was calling the security services to figure out what the hell was happening.

After waiting 20 minutes the receptionists reassured us whilst explaining that someone in the hotel had triggered the alarm in their room, but everything was fine and he let us go back upstairs to sleep.



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Well that doesn't sound ideal! Great work Emiliano :)
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Weekend in Paris - pt2

It was my last night in Paris and the next day I had to get the train to get back home.

My girlfriend and me I watched a film and afterwards we went to bed early.

Suddenly started there was a sound like the hell (a hellish sound - sounds better) and we woke up; the fire alarms went had gone off in the room.

I lean leant over the bed to catch grab my phone and watch check the time; it was the 2.20AM.

After few minutes we realized that the alarms went had gone off in throughout the whole hotel, so we put on some clothes, we have taken grabbed/picked up the dog and set off left the room.

We went downstairs and there were the found other guests in the hall.

The receptionist was calling the security services to figure out what hell was happening.

After waiting 20 minutes, the receptions receptionist reassured us, explaining that someone in the hotel had triggered the alarm in his room, but that everything was fine and he let us we could go back upstairs to get to/and go to sleep.

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Weekend in Paris - pt2

It was my last night in Paris and the next day (I had the train to) get back home. I had a train to  - I had to catch the train to

My girlfriend and me I watched a film (and afterwards we went to) bed early. and then we went - and went to 

(Suddenly started a sound like the hell) and we woke up; the fire alarms went off in the room.
Suddenly we heard a hell-like sound - Suddenly we heard a sound from hell - Suddenly a sound from hell woke us up

I leaned over the bed to catch grab my phone and watch see - check the time; it was the 2.20AM.

After few minutes we realized that the alarms went off were going off in the whole hotel, so we put on some clothes, we have taken took - grabbed the dog and set off left - ran out of the room.

We went downstairs and there were the other guests in the hall.

The receptionist was calling the security services to figure out what hell was happening.

After waiting 20 minutes the receptionist reassured us, explaining that someone in the hotel had triggered pulled - set off the alarm in his room, but everything was fine and he let us go back upstairs to get to sleep.

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