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My first alone trip I went on a trip alone for the first time. I always go on a trip with my friends or family or coworkers. But as I am older, I have a lot of chance to be alone and I am getting used to being alone. I went to JeJu island for five days for a first alone trip. I wonder if it is fun so I made a trip schedule before the trip. I stayed at gesthouse. There were a lot of people who came alone. I visited Seogwipo and saw the waterfall and visited udo island and saw the sea. I ate a lot of delicious food and visited gorgeous place. I really enjoyed my alone trip but there is just one thing to be incovenient. It was hard to take a picture which were in me and beutiful nature all together.

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My First alone Trip Alone

I went on a trip alone for the first time. I always go on a trip with my friends, or family, or coworkers. But as I am older, I have a lot of chances to be alone and I am getting used to being alone. I went to Jeju Island for five days for a my first alone trip alone.
I wondered if it is would be fun so I made planned a trip schedule before the trip. I stayed at a guesthouse. There were a lot of people who came alone. I visited Seogwipo and saw the waterfall and visited Udo island and saw the sea.
I ate a lot of delicious food and visited gorgeous places. I really enjoyed my alone trip alone, but there is just one thing to be that was inconvenient. It was hard to take a picture which were in me of myself and beautiful nature all together.


"Made a schedule" is OK, but I think "planned" is a better choice of words. 

Nice picture, even if it is upside down!  :) 

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my picture is upside down.

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