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an Invitation As the head of Chinese Calligraphy Society, I’m delighted to invite you to participate in our society activity this weekend. The activity will be held at Student Activity Center from 4:00 pm to 6:00 pm this Saturday. It has two parts. First, we will listen to a lecture about Chinese calligraphy, which is a traditional art form in China. Second, there will be a big calligraphy exhibition and you can enjoy the beauty of this art. Also, you can learn to write Chinese characters with the help of calligraphy teachers. It will be an interesting experience for you. I really hope you can join us and am looking forward to your reply. thanks for your corrections~~

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an Invitation

As the head of Chinese Calligraphy Society, I’m delighted to invite you to participate in our society activity this weekend.
The activity will be held at Student Activity Center from 4:00 pm to 6:00 pm this Saturday. It has two parts: First, we will listen to a lecture about Chinese calligraphy, which is a traditional art form in China. Second, there will be a big calligraphy exhibition and you can enjoy the beauty of this art. Also, you can learn to write Chinese characters with the help of calligraphy teachers. It will be an interesting experience for you.
I really hope you can join us and am looking forward to your reply.

thanks for your corrections~


Notes: this is all very fluent. my only thought is to use a colon after "it has two parts" since you then go on to expand on / offer an explanation of those two parts. the next word "First" should remain capitalized since the information following the colon requires two or more complete sentences. other English speakers can fact check me, but I believe this to be accurate.

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