The place where I live
I live in Forlateza the capital of Ceará. It has the most important city of the state. It has a population of over 2.000.000 people .It is a famous city because of the weather it is summer for most of the year and because is a costoal city. It has a lot of famous beachs like Iracema's Beach, Future's beach, moreover there are old buildings, main in the towm centre. One of the most importante sighting is Dragão do Mar, where is near to the beach and is a cultutral centre, where has concerts, theater, restaurantes. Every year there are a lot tourists visiting Fortaleza, and this amount will be higher since now the city has a aiport where is a connexion's point between Europpe and Brasil.
Fortaleza is a northeastern region, has many local foods like tapioca and rapadura and is well-know by the style of music forró and for its typical parties in June. People are really welcoming and here.
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The English is not bad, however the sentences are long. I did not correct the length of the sentences, just the language. I speak American English, so I corrected "centre", but that spelling is correct in British English. You also wrote "theater" which is correct in American English. My advice: decide on either American English or British English and be consistent in spelling. i.e. theater and center or theatre and centre, but do not mix them up.
Here are my corrections:
I live in Forlateza, the capital of Ceará. It is the most important city in the state. It has a population of over two million people. It is a famous city because of the weather: it is summer for most of the year, and because is a coastal city. It has a lot of famous beaches like Iracema's Beach, Future's beach, moreover there are old buildings, mainly in the town center. One of the most important sights is Dragão do Mar, which is near the beach and is a cultural center. It has concerts, theater and restaurants. Every year there are a lot of tourists visiting Fortaleza, and this number will be higher since now the city has an airport which is a connection point between Europe and Brazil.Fortaleza is a northeastern region, has many local foods like tapioca and rapadura and is well-know by the style of music forró and for its typical parties in June. People are really welcoming here.
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