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My daughter's Sunday best. At 7 o’clock my neighbour woke me up by banging around the wall to hang some stupid shot he likes taking with his cutting edge japanese photo camera. I thought I was having a mare but then I realized what was happening. “George!!!”, I screamed, “please bring down that noise, it’s 7 and your pictures suck”, I like being blunt with him, but every time we meet he always talk over his passion for photography. I jumped into the shower hoping the warm water would take me off the laziness but the water didn’t fall, suddenly I remembered that there were warnings on the wall of today cutoff of water in the district, so I had breakfast and, still smelling of the day before sweat, run in the car to go to the company, lucky for me I don’t use to go for in. I live alone because my wife and me have drift apart a couple of months ago. She went back to her mother’s home, with our daughter, and since then I haven’t been able to take up the idea of living without them. The working day passed as bored as everyday, papers, papers and oceans of stacked papers to check and file, the daily try to ask my colleague Monica out and her daily answer “No way!”, but today was a special day because I wanted to make up something for my daughter. She is 11 years old but promised to lead her on to buy a new dress, she likes wearing her “Sunday best” on weekends but she grew out of the old one. It’s gonna be a wonderful day.

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My Daughter's Sunday Best     [In titles always capitalize the first, last, and all important words. Never use an ending period, but do use any other ending type of punctuation.]

At 7 o’clock my neighbour woke me up by banging around the wall to hang some stupid picture of a shot he likes taking with his cutting edge Japanese photo camera. I thought I was having a nightmare but then I realized what was happening. “George!!!”, I screamed, “please bring down that noise, it’s 7 and your pictures suck.” I like being blunt with him, but every time we meet he always talks about* his passion for photography.

I jumped into the shower hoping the warm water would wash off the laziness but the water didn’t fall. Suddenly I remembered that there were warnings on the wall today of a cutoff of water in the district, so I had breakfast and, still smelling of sweat from the day before**, ran into the car to go to the company. Lucky for me I don’t use to go for in[???].

I live alone because my wife and me have drifted apart a couple of months ago. She went back to her mother’s home, with our daughter, and since then I haven’t been able to take up the idea of living without them.

The working day passed as bored as everyday, papers, papers and oceans of stacked papers to check and file, the daily try to ask my colleague Monica out and her daily answer “No way!” But today was a special day because I wanted to make up something for my daughter. She is 11 years old but I promised to help her to buy a new dress, she likes wearing her “Sunday best” on weekends but she grew out of the old one. It’s gonna*** be a wonderful day.

[* Perhaps you were trying to write: "he always overly talks about his ..."

** Or: "still smelling of day-old sweat,"

** This word is street slang so be careful using it. It your work is going to be graded as a test, always write: going to.]

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My Daughter's Sunday Best.

At 7 o’clock my neighbour woke me up by banging on the wall to hang some stupid shot he took with his cutting-edge Japanese photo camera. I thought I was having a nightmare but then I realized what was happening. “George!!!”, I screamed, “please lower the noise, it’s 7 and your pictures suck”. I like being blunt with him, but every time we meet he always talks about his passion for photography.

I jumped into the shower hoping the warm water would wake me up but the water didn’t come out of the nozzle . Suddenly I remembered that there were warnings on the wall about the water being off today in the district, so I had breakfast and, still smelling of the sweat from the day before, I jumped into the car to go to work. Lucky for me I don’t use to go for in.

I live alone because my wife and I have drifted apart a couple of months ago. She went back to her mother’s home, with our daughter, and since then I haven’t been able to take up the idea of living without them.

The working day passed as boring as usual; papers, papers and oceans of stacked papers to check and file, the daily try to ask my colleague Monica out and her daily answer “No way!”, but today was a special day because I wanted to do something for my daughter. She is 11 years old but I promised to take her out to buy a new dress. She likes wearing her “Sunday best” on weekends but she grew out of the old one. It’s gonna be a wonderful day.

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